Sonic Tech Boom (Request)

I find this to be an excellent display of your skill, Although i personally feel it is a little too bright, But that's just be me. The background detail on the right is appealing to the eye and complements Teckzor. Something that bothered me is that the eyes are a little too.. Realistic, And stand out compared to the rest of the pony. Overall, I feel that this is a great piece of work with only a few things to be improved, Although everyone's opinion will be different.
I also must apologize if this is not helpful, As i rarely write critique.